I am a Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Mr Ogilvie and Mr Wong
Thursday, August 25, 2016
Run Jump,Throw
On Thursday the 22 we have to do run jump throw was a little bit different in in run jump throw we have to be in teams it was a so fun the best one was shot pot
This is a great poem, Fatongia. It's a lot of fun. I can see this pudgy dog running to its ice cream in my head now!
Here is one correction, "fast" isn't an adverb, but you could use "quickly" instead. Remember, adverbs should be coloured brown for this task, and verbs (ran) should be coloured red.
Hi Fatongia
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem, Fatongia. It's a lot of fun. I can see this pudgy dog running to its ice cream in my head now!
Here is one correction, "fast" isn't an adverb, but you could use "quickly" instead. Remember, adverbs should be coloured brown for this task, and verbs (ran) should be coloured red.